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geoman286

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Please don't be too harsh with me. I'm learning to play guitar and like to make up my own songs. I call this one 'Dark Walk in the Park'. It means a lot to me. I wrote it for someone i love...someone who can't understand my love for her. this is my attempt to explain it to her.

 

Title - Dark Walk in the Park

 

Every day I think of you
And how things could have been
Hoping you are doing well
Not fighting yourself for time
Can't you tell I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to be happy

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 

Time is passing us by
And we don't learn any better
We don't see the love all around us
Nature we're given in order to survive
Can't you see I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to own this world

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 

I don't have all the answers
But you need to know I love you
I want to hold your hand
Make all of your pain go away
Can't you tell that I miss you
Don't you see I Love You
And gave you all of my heart

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 


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It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park https://youtu.be/jowZJe2ppqs


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some_dude_on_the_interwebs

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George, that's actually some brilliant riffing.

 

You might have noticed I rarely say anything in the "member creations" forum, and that's because if I don't have anything nice to say, I don't say anything.

 

I'm commenting because this is pretty good.

 

You really should try to hammer it into an actual song.


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Serious Sam

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.


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"Out of the dark, into the light, and I'll break down the walls around my heart!
Imaginations from the other side" ~Blind Guardian, Imaginations from the other side


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suomi usa

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Dark Walk in the Park....nice melody...guitar work sounds a little like Metallica to me...nice!

 

Be sure to share the lyrics when you get them written!  Please keep practicing!


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                    ~Live with intention!   *   ~Walk to the edge!   *    ~Listen hard!  ~

           ~ Practice wellness!   *  ~Play with abandon!   *   ~Appreciate your friends!  ~

                      ~ Choose with no regret!  * ~ Continue to learn!  * ~ Laugh!  ~

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geoman286

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

I'm glad my song held your interest and especially glad that you liked it. I have several songs that I'm working on, but this one is my favorite.


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It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park https://youtu.be/jowZJe2ppqs


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geoman286

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I had combined my Bikers Holiday and Dark Walk in the Park into one post...but I didn't like it that way so I edited this one. I did so because this song means the most to me...i wrote the lyric for someone i truely love and miss...i want this song to stand alone.


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It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park https://youtu.be/jowZJe2ppqs


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geoman286

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

Sure. Feel free to sing to them! If you decided to sing my songs i'd ask that you share it with everyone on the forum...so we all can hear you. i'd love to hear Dark Walk in the Park with my lyrics...they mean a lot to me. my friend Darrin is a musician and has some production ability so we are going to work on my songs, but i have no problem with you singing to them. Please do! Remember though...please share your results.


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It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park https://youtu.be/jowZJe2ppqs





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