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geoman286

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Please don't be too harsh with me. I'm learning to play guitar and like to make up my own songs. I call this one 'Dark Walk in the Park'. It means a lot to me. I wrote it for someone i love...someone who can't understand my love for her. this is my attempt to explain it to her.

 

Title - Dark Walk in the Park

 

Every day I think of you
And how things could have been
Hoping you are doing well
Not fighting yourself for time
Can't you tell I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to be happy

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 

Time is passing us by
And we don't learn any better
We don't see the love all around us
Nature we're given in order to survive
Can't you see I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to own this world

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 

I don't have all the answers
But you need to know I love you
I want to hold your hand
Make all of your pain go away
Can't you tell that I miss you
Don't you see I Love You
And gave you all of my heart

 

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

 


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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some_dude_on_the_interwebs

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George, that's actually some brilliant riffing.

 

You might have noticed I rarely say anything in the "member creations" forum, and that's because if I don't have anything nice to say, I don't say anything.

 

I'm commenting because this is pretty good.

 

You really should try to hammer it into an actual song.


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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.


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Dark Walk in the Park....nice melody...guitar work sounds a little like Metallica to me...nice!

 

Be sure to share the lyrics when you get them written!  Please keep practicing!


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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

I'm glad my song held your interest and especially glad that you liked it. I have several songs that I'm working on, but this one is my favorite.


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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I had combined my Bikers Holiday and Dark Walk in the Park into one post...but I didn't like it that way so I edited this one. I did so because this song means the most to me...i wrote the lyric for someone i truely love and miss...i want this song to stand alone.


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

Sure. Feel free to sing to them! If you decided to sing my songs i'd ask that you share it with everyone on the forum...so we all can hear you. i'd love to hear Dark Walk in the Park with my lyrics...they mean a lot to me. my friend Darrin is a musician and has some production ability so we are going to work on my songs, but i have no problem with you singing to them. Please do! Remember though...please share your results.


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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I previously posted a song called 'Dark Walk in the Park' here in Member Creations. This is another song I'm working on...it's called 'Bikers Holiday'. The song is probably more like the 70's rock I grew up listening to....can't say you'll like it. Just please be gentle with your comments.

 

Bikers Holiday (lyrics)

 

Call up all of your friends
Gather for a fast and furious ride
Down paths to natures hidden gems
Within this beautifully created land

 

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday
Yeah!!!
A Biker’s Holiday
 

We’ll figure out this world's problems
While riding on two wheels
Rolling down our roads and trails
Enjoying the scenes all the way

 

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday
Yeah!!!
A Biker’s Holiday
 

Another ride from the heart
Another day to share with you
Going for it all today
We’ll never stop...we’ll never stop

 

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday
Yeah!!!
A Biker’s Holiday

 


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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This is called 'Backdoor Politics'. Lyrics written...but i'm working om them. I screwed up the ending pretty bad...but i'm not a very good player yet. i hope to improve.

 

Backdoor Politics (lyrics)

 

Politics in Our lives

Are not fair or just

We work and Slave

To maintain our existence

Having Government fighting us

All of the way

 

Backdoor Politics

Leaders Use Our strengths

To make themselves Rich

Ruining Our Countries

And selling Our Souls

With their Backdoor Politics

 

We need to fix Our World

Work with each other

End our misery

Raise each other up

We don't need the elite

We can think for ourselves

 

Backdoor Politics

Leaders Use Our strengths

To make themselves Rich

Ruining Our Countries

And selling Our Souls

With their Backdoor Politics

 

Your rules will be defeated

We will put you out

Make you work with us

You'll have to earn a living

As it is meant to be

For now and in our future

 

Backdoor Politics

Leaders Use Our strengths

To make themselves Rich

Ruining Our Countries

And selling us out

With their Backdoor Politics

 

Backdoor Politics

Make them go away

Save Our World

From destruction

 


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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I have this other song I'm working on. I'm not a good guitar player yet. Maybe someday? Rain On Your Love is something I want to do for someone else. Rain on their love and hope it will grow into something beautiful. Something I believe in.

 

Rain On Your Love (lyrics)

 

When I first met you
I knew you were the one
Powerful, elegant, and smart
I desire to walk beside you

Forever!
 

I Want to Rain on your love
And watch it grow
Into many beautiful flowers
You'll be willing to show

Let it rain...

 

You have all the answers
To questions I'm not allowed to give
So we are distant...very far apart
I'm not sure what I did

Why am I so wrong?
 

I Got to Rain on your love
And hope it grows
Into many beautiful flowers
You'll be willing to show

Let it rain...

 

Our ending will be written
However Gods may choose
But We are lions in the stars
It is time...

To fix our broken lives
 

I Rain on your love
And watch it grow
Into many beautiful flowers
You will show

Let it rain...

 

God...please let it rain!

 


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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This one is painful...but we all have to live with it. I'll keep changing little things here and there...try to make it a better lyric.

 

Love Goes Away (lyrics)

 

We can't know our future

And our love changes fast

One day we're happy

The next we lose everything

How do we cope

And forget about love?

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on

And Not think of her

Love goes away

It just disappears

 

We hurt and we heal

Lean on our friends

And learn to become better people

Heartbreak takes its toll

While we continue on

Trying to mend our broken Soul

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on

And Not think of her

Love goes away

She just disappears

 

We're all just human

And must deal with our feelings

Love hurts us to our core

So We let it go

We just let love go!!

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on

And Not think of her

Love goes away

She just disappears

 


  • 1

Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI


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geoman286

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I have rhythm guitar for this one...messed up the end badly...i'll have to record it again. until then...the version below will have to do.

 

March of the Gods

 

I go it alone in this world

No one is here to help me

Deal with my pain and suffering

Life and time both seem so cruel

What am I supposed think and do

 

The march of the Gods

Proceeds across my chest

The Gods will have their way

I must continue to do my best

Against The march of the Gods

 

I have no true Lover

I can't  count on anyone else

I am all that I will ever have

It is my task to find the key

To unlock my Collective Soul

 

The march of the Gods

Proceeds across my chest

The Gods will have their way

I must continue to do my best

Against The march of the Gods

 

I will never give up on myself

Don't intend to give into despair

I Pray for the Gods to forgive me

Nature is my source of happiness

I hope for her Love someday

 

The march of the Gods

Proceeds across my heart

My Gods will have their way

While I continue to do my best

For the March of Mother Earth

 


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Love goes away...There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on...And Not think of her

Love goes away...She just disappears

https://youtu.be/ADcsTbRzmyI





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